Response to critique of assignment 1

I thought everyone had interesting comments about my loop video. Marco brought up some Interesting points about how the actual transfer of money isn't really shown and also the interest of the viewer to see what people are buying. These are some really interesting points that are something to think about for further projects. Another comment was that the sound was weird because it dropped off after the sound of the cash register and the door bell, this is something I struggled with too but I am still unsure how to resolve this problem.